For Comment, Emily Passino

I just finished the 2nd of 4 classes by Rich Sieling on Color Management. His approach is to ask these four questions, in order: 1. Is it bright (or dark) enough? 2. Is it contrast-y enough? 3. Is the color correct? 4. Is there enough color? Here's an example of one photo I've been working on for homework. I wonder how it could be further improved. Here it is out of the camera:

Here are my edits before taking Rich's class (and I should say, that i went to a 16:9 aspect ratio which I loved, but am now trying to get away from)

And here are today's edits: